One technique I used in both my revised version and my initial version was laying out the sports we cover with bullets rather than using a paragraph format. The reason I did this is so that when skimming using the F pattern, a person is more likely to quickly comprehend a bulleted list and find what they need quickly, rather than reading an entire paragraph of fluff and losing interest in our content. An additional element I added was a quick subhead above the list to declare what the list actually is. This helps readability because in the first revision of my introductory post, I feel as though the list is just sort of thrown in there, and you have to actually read the content above to understand what the list is in reference to. In this version, it simply explains what we have done and can do. This helps because if you are just skimming, you can still understand the content on a higher level. I also use this list to reinforce the content above, which the subheading helps with. Now, rather than just a list being there on the page, it flows much nicer when reading it because the list directly correlates to the subheading, which directly correlates to the paragraph above, making it a smoother transition and less choppy.